“Inevitably She Declined”

“Inevitably She Declined”

On a bishop’s backless chair, inevitably, upright she declined
Watching an empire flicker & die out. Morning, an anodyne
Of undrugged sleep, her attendant files the wedding ring embedded
In her flesh for half a century, an unhinged sapphire unmarrying
A monarch to this life of beautiful bastard sovereignty, unwedding
England’s bloated hand. By evening an heirless country waits to bury
A distended queen with hawthorn boughs, bonfires blazing majusculed
Letters in the streets. She will go on watching them, upright & inevitable.
When Elizabeth sat dying, she would not lie down, for fear
She would never rise again, her high neck propped with molecules
Of lace, circling a countenance decked with the small queer
Embellishments of monarchy. In a breathless hour, her virguled
Breath, a speechless pilgrim grateful for a little death, minuscule
Between moments, squall of air reclining, upright bolt, declining vertical.

Lucie Brock-Broido

This sonnet is sheer bliss for anyone who loves the English language. Brock-Broido accomplishes vertigineous verbal acrobatics without once sacrificing intelligence or sense. Count how many of the words have at least double meanings! I’ve read this poem out loud  and taken great pleasure in the way you must read the words slowly, with love and pomp. The sonnet is brocaded with “b” sounds–as brocaded as the Queen’s dress. As we make a slow and stately progress through this sonnet, we go back and revisit sounds and images. “Majusculed” marries “molecules” and “virguled” and reminds us of majesty. “Virguled” (a wonderful word here) leads us to vertical and makes us think of the Virgin Queen.

I also like the “un”-ness of the poem: Elizabeth is characterized by what she is not as much as by what she is, when dying: “undrugged” “unmarrying” wearing an “unhinged” sapphire, “unwedding” England as she inevitably dies.

It’s amazing–“boughs, bonfires blazing” and the “bishop’s backless chair”. This kind of language and these images are, to me, what catnip is to cats and Happy Meals to toddlers. Intoxicatingly wonderful. Nor do I find this poem an exercise in academic language–I feel for the queen, declining and dying. She is fully humanized for me here. That final breath is a precious pilgrim gone to seek another world by ending the sonnet with grace and majesty.

Author: Gubbinal

Bookish, tea-drinking cat-lady who loves great poetry and music and is in the midst of dying

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